Tuesday, 22 May 2018

My quick write

This is my QuickWrite.  We get given the sentence starter and we have to carry it on.  I like this one because it was easy to think of what the world could look like.

In 50 years the world will be dry as a potato. It will be just dead trees dead plants and tumbleweeds. No water no just dry. There will be no humans no life just tardigrades the unkillable little microscopic bug.Only rocks and metals and stuff disintegrating and in another 50 years there will be nothing. Just rocks and stuff. The end

The best words I used were: disintegrating, tardigrade, dry as a potato, tumbleweed.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jamie, I really like this quick write. I agree with you about the best words you used. I particularly like disintegrating! Thank you for sharing with me what a tardigrade is... maybe you could put a picture of it on your post?

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  2. Hi Jamie, its Kohine your blog buddy. I really like your quick write and I also like how you thought about your words and how you carried on your story. This post reminds me of my quick writes. You could add infomation on what your best words mean like disintegrating and tardigrade. Kohine

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  3. Hi Jamie, A potato! Interesting description!
    What if it happened to be a soft and salty buttery potato with crispy bacon and feta. We might find the earths surface a little harder to walk on, than just a standard potato out of the bag- but at least we would be well feed!

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